This feedback might sound complicated! But I will try to write it as simply as possible.
164 - I like this font, but would be interested to see the letters spaced a bit more in "redesign" so that "Healthy Life" can be made a bit larger as well. Additionally, I really like the letter R in "redesign" from design 159. Can we keep the rest of the font the same in entry 164 but just change the R to something with a bit more flair like in 159? I feel like the R could be dropped a bit lower vertically from the rest of the letters so that it doesn't stand quite so high (as it does in 159), and again leaves a bit more room for "Healthy Life". If there isn't enough room below, we can try writing only "Dr. Kimberley O'Brien, ND" and leave out the word "by" (but if there is room let's include it, but capitalize the B). If need be, we can try putting the ND on the other side of the letter G. This may look good or maybe it will not work at all! But generally I feel that I would like "Healthy Life" to be just a bit bigger overall.
165 - Overall I really like this, but opposite to the issue with 164, I feel that the "Healthy Life" should be just a little bit smaller (but still quite a bit larger than in 164).
I like the fonts in the designs, and the simplicity overall. If anything would be missing it would be just a little bit character in the design. Perhaps something very natural and small that doesn't take away from the rest of the design and is just before or part of the word Healthy to counter balance the leaf at the end (this would probably only be for design 165, as 164 seems to have enough already with the different layout).
I apologize for such a long message!
Thanks,
Kimberley