Hi! I like this concept and would love to see a few variations of it if possible. Perhaps the R of the redesign could lead into a curled leaf unfolding. I think this could be a really great design with a few modifications. I really like that the word redesign is big and green and prominent in the design. Thanks!
Hi thanks for such a positive feedback I read your brief about the word redesign and I agree it should be the focal point of the logo to incorporate an artistic flair. Here's a couple version of the R with curled leaf #118 #119 #120
Thanks for your response and your updated entries. I actually feel that your initial design is more balanced and has a better flow. Perhaps seeing a few more creative options that are similar might help me to see the potential. Thanks!
I am interested in concept 141. I would like to see a different font for "healthy life". I would also be interested in a few different colour combinations: - Green "Healthy Life", Teal "Redesign" and dark purple "By Dr. Kimberley O'Brien, ND" with the leaf in green but the stem transitioning from blue to green. - Another design with the opposite (Teal "HEalthy life", Green "Redesign", Purple "By Dr. Kimberley ND" and the leaf and stem being entirely green.)
Hi Dr. O'Brien thanks for the feedback again. Here's the new color scheme with the new font for Healthy Life per your above request
#143 : Green "Healthy Life", Teal "Redesign" and dark purple "By Dr. Kimberley O'Brien, ND" with the leaf in green but the stem transitioning from blue to green. #144 : Teal "Healthy life", Green "Redesign", Purple "By Dr. Kimberley ND" and the leaf and stem being entirely green
I really like the new font and style of the word "redesign" in #159, that is exactly what I mean by lighter and more casual. Let's play with that logo and perhaps similar styles to try and make the rest of it really unique. Thanks!
Hi! Can I please see entry 160 with the "Healthy life" in teal and the "redesign" still in green? And maybe the "by Dr. Kimberley O'Brien, ND" in dark grey.
And then another perhaps with "Healthy Life" in green, the Redesign in Teal and the leaf in green? Thanks!
This feedback might sound complicated! But I will try to write it as simply as possible.
164 - I like this font, but would be interested to see the letters spaced a bit more in "redesign" so that "Healthy Life" can be made a bit larger as well. Additionally, I really like the letter R in "redesign" from design 159. Can we keep the rest of the font the same in entry 164 but just change the R to something with a bit more flair like in 159? I feel like the R could be dropped a bit lower vertically from the rest of the letters so that it doesn't stand quite so high (as it does in 159), and again leaves a bit more room for "Healthy Life". If there isn't enough room below, we can try writing only "Dr. Kimberley O'Brien, ND" and leave out the word "by" (but if there is room let's include it, but capitalize the B). If need be, we can try putting the ND on the other side of the letter G. This may look good or maybe it will not work at all! But generally I feel that I would like "Healthy Life" to be just a bit bigger overall.
165 - Overall I really like this, but opposite to the issue with 164, I feel that the "Healthy Life" should be just a little bit smaller (but still quite a bit larger than in 164).
I like the fonts in the designs, and the simplicity overall. If anything would be missing it would be just a little bit character in the design. Perhaps something very natural and small that doesn't take away from the rest of the design and is just before or part of the word Healthy to counter balance the leaf at the end (this would probably only be for design 165, as 164 seems to have enough already with the different layout).