I like the overall layout, but I thing the HTPG is too large. I like the use of the "+" in the HTPG. I would to see a larger HealthTech and smaller HTPG.
sure i can do that version too, but your contest is on judging phase right now which is mean only first ranked designer is able to submit more desgns. if you want a designers to make changes/revisions at this you can to put him/her as the first ranked one :)