Would be happy to make changes, but at this stage in the contest, only the person in first place can actually make any submissions. Plus, we can't contact you directly by Private Message unless we are in the first place position (which can be temporary if you change your mind, of course) to make the process of changes faster. If you put me in first (even temporarily) can you private message me so that I don't miss the opportunity? And are we talking about the submission that is currently in 3rd (#30)?
Thanks again for kind comments, feedback and direction. I will be waiting to hear. Again, happy to make any and all changes you need.
C