i like the idea - I like the man above health, and the woman above beauty. I dont know if I like the texty parts or fonts The rear sun thing is interesting but may be distracting away from a simple look.
Can you simplify this a bit more by doing something with the man and women's shape so that it can be replicated easier - ie using the male 'form' and the female 'form' rather than a full picture of them?