#1 - This looks a little "sports team" to me. I make handmade jewelry, would like the logo to represent what I do. More feminine, more of the hawk. Reference to jewelry, maybe some beads or earrings. Please feel free to check out some of my work on etsy ( www.hawksnesttraders/shop/etsy.com ) for some ideas. Good work though. :-)
#6 - I like this hawk better, with the exception of the coloring. Maybe just the silhoutte with the coloring on the tail feathers. Please feel free to reference my work on etsy. (http://www.etsy.com/shop/hawksnesttraders) This may give more of an idea what it is I am looking for.