HawkMeadowLogo Design Contest

Hi John,

Thanks for feedback, no worries about that. Before you can update your brief and give reference font do you like, I try update my proposal #107 #108 #109 #110 and #111, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

Thanks! Checking with family on this.

Thanks Jefry,
I'm learning there are many 'Architect' fonts, so my apologies. This, or #60 is not it....I'm looking for more lineal and refined. All to say, please remove the grass and let's take a look at a different font. I'll try to look up some examples, but have been traveling, so my apologies for not getting back to you sooner.

Hi John,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #99 and #100, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

Thanks so much! The family wants to focus more on the feather, so could you please remove the grass on this example and perhaps slide the feather/mountain down a bit closer to the font? Thanks again!

Hi John,

Thanks for feedback, do you mean like this #59 and #60 using architect font?, let me know your thoughts

Regards,
Jefry

Darn, I meant Architect font and not Blueprint. (Or something very clean). My apologies! This is the best feather imitation of the entire competition.

Hi John,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #39 #40 #41 #42 and #43, let me know your thoughts.

Regards,
Jefry

Excellent! Can we try a cleaner font, green grass base and golden grass stalks, and mountain profile (very nice touch!) in black? I would also like to see a version with a clean boarder surround. This is your best version yet! John

Nice! Can we try black font on 'Hawk', make the grass base green inside the O and golden stalks above the 'O'. Will want to try some sort of clean boarder... Thanks again!

Ahh!! I just saw this and it was exactly what I mentioned previously on the colors of the grass. Let's see what this version looks like with Blueprint font (or similar) and with the mountain profile arching over the top. Thanks again!

Jefry, This is a great start! Can you provide a cleaner, more linear font? (I'm sorry, don't have time to look up specifics, but perhaps you can try Blueprint font?) I love that you incorporated the pattern in the feather to what I uploaded. Can we see what it looks like with changing the grass 'base' and grass stalks some shade of green but the end of the stalks the same color you currently have? Could you also consider sending a separate version of this that contains a line profile of the mountain that I uploaded? It might add some interest...Thanks again for this strong work!

Greetings...

I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful.

Regards
Jefry