Hawkins GlassLogo Design Contest

made the hawks wings like glass.

awesome concept!

Made some slight tweaks to my concept in #156. Let me know if there is anything I can do to improve it.

Thanks!

that looks great! definitely unique

#158 = stylized letter H in glass form...

162 / 158 are split at a split vote here. If we intend to put it on a black t shirt, what would you do to it so it would stand out?

Please see #169 and #170. Note that I didn't use any gradients but just flat colors as gradients do not translate well to t-shirts. Let me know if there is anything else I can do to get top rank.

Thanks!

#171 has slight gradients that could be used for web or other print, etc....

I like it. I will let you know if I get any specific feedback from the group.

new hawk in #186...

Really like 186. Add the lines around GLASS like you did with 169.

Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately I won't be back at my computer before the contest closes but if my design has a chance to win the first ranked designer can submit changes during judging mode so its not a problem.

Thanks for understanding!!

Not a problem. I was having trouble getting anyone to decide Sunday. I really like the 186. We have it narrowed down to you and one other. I will let you know as soon as we decide.

Great. I was hoping to tweak the hawk just a bit but if you want to see any changes that may help sway you let me know.

Thanks!

Moved you to first so you can submit the tweak you were talking about.

did you tweak it? I couldn't see the difference in the bird?? how difficult would it be to take the square layers of glass, and just make them a shield shape? THANKS

Yes, I tweaked the claws and subtle shape on the wings and beak and direction of the bird (sorry, I am a perfectionist).

So you want this bird inside of a shield?

okay i can tell now!! looks good. We like the three "panes of glass" but instead of square, can you make them into the shape of a shield. With the eagle still overlayed just like it is. (this was the original idea of one of our bosses, and it got kind of lost. but when you submitted this logo, it is exactly what we had in mind)

Yes, I can do that but it might take me a little bit of time so I will try to work on it and get it up soon. I hope you can wait on it. Please let me know.

Thanks for your patience!

take your time! It might be exactly what we are looking for so we can wait. no rush!

Actually, it didnt take as long as I thought. It is #194. I think it came out pretty nice.

Let me know what you think. Thanks!

entry# 194....getting there! See how in #193 u have three individual squares of glass? Can you make them that shield shape...so basically there would be three separate shields...angled back like the square ones. (almost like someone took a shield and separated it into three layers).

I am working on it but a lot more challenging than it seems. It may take me some time for real this time :)

haha okay. this is GREATLY appreciated. I have faith in you!

how about #195?

hmmm. i think I'm still liking the three separate layers like #193 better. All the bosses are gone today so will have to wait till tomorrow for more feedback. thank you for the revisions. stand by!

Thanks, I will also see if i can keep tweaking to see if I can make it look a little smoother. I also like #193 because its clear that its glass whereas I think the shield element may add a little confusion.

Let me know of any other changes. Thanks again.

Kyro