Artshow should be bigger and black. Nothing to the left or right of the type. The green one worked better but there is no land visible from the vantage point of the park that this is held. Maybe the sailboats should be white with just suggestion it is a sailboat. less literal.
close but no land. from that vantage point you only see horizon and faraway greyblue area, water, and sun. Can you try it without the 58 info, Maybe sailboat shape instead of kayak.
Placing this in the no thanks but if reworked simplified to comment above. the 58th annual can be added later, it's more of an accent and not the most important part.
Just thought I could be more helpful. This show overlooks the headwaters of the Chesapeake Bay. From the park it is held in you see water and a horizon line. The sunrises there I believe. No pine trees, and you would not see a bridge from there. This translates as outdoors adventure. Looking for a more modern font that is not dated and will not become dated.
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