Hatch Street StudiosLogo Design Contest

if you still like my design.. you can give feedback.. i am ready to make revisions until you like it..
Thank You

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Thank you for choosing me as a finalist for the selection stage. Is there any feedback for me?

thanks for the feedback.. i have revised the design.. please check #256

Can you also do one with all letters in black?

Is it possible to make the red circles a little more prominent? concerned about how the light circles will look on larger format printing. thank you.

How about this? Let me know if you have further questions, requests and information for adjustments that I have to make. So that I can work in the direction you want. Thanks

thanks for the feedback.. i have revised the design.. please check

is it possible to do this logo with a little thicker font size and swirl. only concerned about putting it on signs and banners. it may be too faint. thank you.

thanks for the feedback.. i have revised the design.. please check

Like the logo. Can you put the words hatch and street on the same line with the word studio underneath? thank you