I like this very much. My computer has acted up so I'm working off my iPhone. The images are smaller to see, unfortunately, and that is also why I haven't commented until now. Yikes, what timing! Anyhow, good work!
I'm this design, the box type is too bold and I'm afraid the statue of liberty will be lost. I assume you are the same artist that did #7, my first choice, so thank you for your double effort.
All of your submissions are wonderful --- woman, hand, hat, and general attitude. I prefer a more feminine font than is used with some "box" choices. Also, I wonder if the statue of liberty is too small to really register although I like the star as beauty mark. My press agent says I should add Gay Storm's HatBox Will Travel instead of just HatBox Will Travel---is that cool at this point. I almost certainly will use one of your designs.
Hi SN - Please focus on modifications of #5 and focus on variations on the logotype. The logo execution on #5 is emphasizing BOX but we need the name HatBox Will Travel to stick in the observer's mind and eye. HatBox is the obvious shortened version of the business name as well. Would like to see a variation with your red emphasis underline under the tagline. The tagline is a critical clue as to what HatBox does and is designed to appeal to the target audience. Thanks!
Hi SN - Please focus on modifications of #5 and focus on variations on the logotype. The logo execution on #5 is emphasizing BOX but we need the name HatBox Will Travel to stick in the observer's mind and eye. HatBox is the obvious shortened version of the business name as well. Would like to see a variation with your red emphasis underline under the tagline. The tagline is a critical clue as to what HatBox does and is designed to appeal to the target audience. Thanks!