I like this design very much even though it doesn't have a Women's face attached to it. Hmm, the hat needs a little more brim? Perhaps an eye peeking out from under the brim? A wink?
Hi Digita2006 - Looking good. Can you please do some font variations with #59. We need a logotype that is distinctive when the illustration is not included for some uses. I On #59 "Will Travel" is a bit visually busy with the loops etc. - would like to see a cleaner bolder type - same with the tagline - needs to add something to the communication - either more contemporary or more historical. Would like to see if we can introduce some (not all) more contemporary elements here to give an "edge" to the logo design - since the shows do have a nice edge and wink to them that is a distinctly contemporary point of view. Make sense?
Hi Digita2006 - Looking good. Can you please do some font variations with #59. We need a logotype that is distinctive when the illustration is not included for some uses. I On #59 "Will Travel" is a bit visually busy with the loops etc. - would like to see a cleaner bolder type - same with the tagline - needs to add something to the communication - either more contemporary or more historical. Would like to see if we can introduce some (not all) more contemporary elements here to give an "edge" to the logo design - since the shows do have a nice edge and wink to them that is a distinctly contemporary point of view. Make sense?
Sorry about the duplicate comments. The client prefers a more feminine font for HatBox like the one you have chosen would just like to see it bolder and a crisper, more distinctive font combination. Very much like the attitude and energy.
the bold energy of #3 is great - might think about how to capture that in 59. We are using Gay Storm's before the name to capitalize on her celebrity to publicize the company.
Love the quill addition. A couple requests in this phase; 1. Can you add a flourish to the hat - to give some movement 2. Smile on the face might help bring up energy and enthusiasm 3. A rendition that is more horizontal that would work in the banner of the website at http://hatboxwilltravel.com
Thank you. Let me know when you are ready to submit and I will move you to #1.
Hi - The simpler hat was better. Like the expression change. We'd like to see you lighten your design. Your revisions are more bold and we don't want to go that direction. Can you take another try with simpler hat?