The river run between that rock cliff/mountain and the cabin, so the river needs to be alittle darker blue and it need to come out of a "canyon" upstream runs along that mountain and turns 90 degrees down the mountain side to go straight away from the cabin.
Can you add a simple deck to cabin, darken colors on cabins, black windows, River should break to the left of the logo. IT runs directly away from teh windows on the cabin downsteam. This is very close.
Entry #65 i've made the changes you asked.I've aded the deck in front of the cabin,black windows darker colour for the cabin and changes to the river.I used the link you provided as reference.Wait your comments.