The eyes glasses and hair look great! If you could touch up the shoulders and chin a little bit to make it look less sketched that's be awesome! I like the ark of the text on top but try to straighten it out on the bottom. Over all love Entry #30 feel free to create another deviation if you're feeling creative, but you're defiantly on the right track : )
Okaaay.... I've posted a new one,, it's more nerdy... The one with short hair, yeah she's hot, but she does need a little work.. I'll see what I can do to accomodate with those alterations..