This may look familiar : )
Love your sense of typography! (Would love to see what you could do with sans as well.)
Some other input: May be a bit too much. Simplify it, maybe? More subtle? And try some other colors on, too. Go for it!
Thanks so much for entering. Hope to see more. : )
~Geoff
P.S. Our target audience is a Mega-Yacht ritzy group. Sails don't do much for them, unfortunately. The abstract waves work nicely, though.