Can you make the pelican more obvious? We know we want a pelican but it could be a duck and the word is kind of obscure. The "B" is not really legible. We also feel the stripes is a little hard rock cafe. Can you remove them or come up with a different concept? Can you turn the "B" into the pelican so the word "Habit" is obvious?
Last request. Can you put #60 pelican into #143. And put more blue fading away into the sky. Like you have in 141 and 142 on the inside make it on the outside.
Ok you are not understanding. I am sorry. 154 is right except the outside of the sun should be red. Outside of the sun. Outside of the red line could you put some blue fading out like you did with the red inside the sun.