Guttas ButikkLogo Design Contest

Hi, I hope you like my design, your feedback would be really appreciated.

Thanks,
Edwin

Can you make it without the slogan? And a harder outline? Ex. dark grey outer line?

Hi,

Did you mean change the brown outline to dark grey?

Yep. And work on some of the details. I like this, bus miss something (dont ask me what ;)

here is with dark grey #79
And here is with black #80

#82 an improvement, perhaps you like it

Hi, any other feedback for my design?
Thanks