GustavBreuerLogo Design Contest

I had to look twice to understand the logo. A bit like the Freud drawing: when you see the G you dont see the B. I like it. I think the first part of the logo doesn't match enough with the design of theword

I really like your beginning of the logo. The more I look, the more I think that the typography of the second part should be otherwise. What does colour bring in this design?

I think that your logo has the most potential of all logo's untill now. But is isnt in balance!

Thanks for your feedbacks, I will submit revised design with a better typography.
I have use dark grey colour for this design.
Do you have any other colour preferences?

Would you please look at entry 35 to improve yours (robust typography)
thanks
Gustav Breuer

I just saw the grey colour in your design I like that. But I saw it only because you told me... Is that good or bad?

Happy! If you see both solutions next to eachother and you would critisize yourself, what whould you say? Theres to be done something, but I dont no what

And now...to convince You're the best...
1) firts part of logo no. 9
2) second half of logo no. 70
3) perhaps more playing with colour / metallic or whatever. That's what I like about the logo no. 9
4) I see that logo and backcolor do a lot in combination. Other designers used a slight yellow colour in the back. Could you try that, and maby a few other combnations.
Thanks for your suggestions!
Gustav

I think I will stop the contest within 24 hours

I am out of my office now.
I will deliver revised designs soon.

Thank you

There's a big chance you win the contest (if there's not a new surpising contribution to the contest). There's no hurry. The reason I want to stop the contest is because no surpising designs come in anymore!
Thank you for your reaction.

Sorry...did you see something really surprising happening? I allmost closed the competition for you logo. sorry for you. I still like your logo very much

I'm thinking of closing the contest. But I'm really fond of the first part of your no.9 logo (third place in contest). I want to by it, if You make it a bit more what should I say...metallic? I mean: I dont want just the two-tone you made, but various grey in it. Or something else. Maybe you could propose me a few options of that. You may leave the word apart.
g.breuer@xs4all.nl

It doesn't matter whether I am not winning this contest, just let it flow.
If you still interested with my design, I will contact you after the contest has been closed.

Thank you

I like what you did!

I am going to close the contest and want to buy the first part of your logo. Could you send this in ways I can use it voor promotion, letters et cetera
Thanks for all the effort!
Gustav Breuer
g.breuer@xs4all.nl

With a pleasure, I am going to deliver it as soon as the contest just completed.

Regards

Could you please check your e-mail?

Thanks