I submitted some options of blue & pink and blue & green color combinations. I think blue & pink combination looks the best, since it conveys more luxurious and fancy vibes.
Also, I submitted bolder fonts. However, I wouldn't go ahead with too bold font because it would be "too heavy" looking compared with the icon. The icon has relatively thinner lines, so I think the text should correspond to that accordingly. Entry #225 is the best in this category.
Also, I added a small color triangle in G letter. I think it gives more consistency to overall logo (icon and text combination).
I wouldn't combine my idea with "Arrow and G" idea just because it would make the logo way too complicated, with too much meaning in one logo :)
Also, "Arrow and G" idea has already been done multiple times before by other designers.
Please let me know once you have feedback from the team.
Meanwhile, I will try to work my my concept, making it better looking visually
This is something is I came up with based on the old version of the car. I believe this is a good starting point that can lead to something great ultimately
One thing I liked about your earlier submissions like #66 was it did think car when I saw it and wave. Both stood out to me but were subtle - which was AWESOME!
We have seemed to have lost the car feel a bit. Not sure if you could do a version that retains that a bit more .
But I do like all of the other recent changes you made. Very classy.
Yes, that's a good point. That part needs to be resolved for sure.
I have submitted an option with more "horizontal" version of the car. I also made the waves a little bit more consistent visually.
I really like yoru thinking. I appreciate you clarifying and sharing your design experience. I would say I agree with you.
One thing I like about #66 is that it did look like a car (ish). Now that we have truncated the front and the tale of the care it looks less like it.
While I don't want wheels - I would maybe see if we can do a longer version of the car/wave now that it can fit with the other waves inside of the round logo.
Thanks for the feedback.
I would add G letter into the logo, but it would make the logo more complicated both visually and conceptually.
The idea of the logo is the creative combination of waves and car. So the logo is already meaningful enough and adding G letter would make the logo "too much to think about" for the audience.
However, in order to solve the problem with the empty space on the top and bottom of the car, I added additional waves - making the icon more consistence both visually and conceptually. In other words, the additional waves are simply the "extension" of the existing idea.
We are really wanting you in the top 5. I know that you can't submit until we move you into that position but we will be doing that later today.
We really really like your Car/Wave feel. We would like to see what that would look like more in square/round format where it would work well as a favicon, photo/image on social etc.
Could you take what you have done and make it more like a mark with the words "Grow Car Wash" out beside it separate from the mark.
You created a very professional and clean logo. We really like it!
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Thank you so much for your submissions. The team has made the decsion to rank yours third. But it wasn't for a lack of trying.
You did a great job and I really appreciate all your creativity and input!!!
Thank you so much!
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I submitted some options of blue & pink and blue & green color combinations. I think blue & pink combination looks the best, since it conveys more luxurious and fancy vibes.
Also, I submitted bolder fonts. However, I wouldn't go ahead with too bold font because it would be "too heavy" looking compared with the icon. The icon has relatively thinner lines, so I think the text should correspond to that accordingly. Entry #225 is the best in this category.
Also, I added a small color triangle in G letter. I think it gives more consistency to overall logo (icon and text combination).
Cheers,
Arthur
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What are your thoughts on a bolder font?
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What are your thoughts on the blue merging into a green vs a pink?
Would you mind submitting that version?
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Thanks so much for considering the idea. I understand and appreciate your push back and respect you holding a line on this.
I like the gradient version you just posted. I will get back with you by tomorrow AM. Everyone is leaving he office now.
Thanks so much for you dedication to he project.
Kyle
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Also, "Arrow and G" idea has already been done multiple times before by other designers.
Please let me know once you have feedback from the team.
Meanwhile, I will try to work my my concept, making it better looking visually
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Please .... don't shoot the messenger .... LOL ;-)
But the team is really liking the idea of an arrow around the circle that would also have a feel of a "G."
I'm mentioning this, while not forgetting our last convo about complexity and too much visually. ;-)
But if you could think about submitting something like that with this being the center of that ... we might be able to get everyone's tastes met ;-)
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We have seemed to have lost the car feel a bit. Not sure if you could do a version that retains that a bit more .
But I do like all of the other recent changes you made. Very classy.
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Yes, that's a good point. That part needs to be resolved for sure.
I have submitted an option with more "horizontal" version of the car. I also made the waves a little bit more consistent visually.
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I really like yoru thinking. I appreciate you clarifying and sharing your design experience. I would say I agree with you.
One thing I like about #66 is that it did look like a car (ish). Now that we have truncated the front and the tale of the care it looks less like it.
While I don't want wheels - I would maybe see if we can do a longer version of the car/wave now that it can fit with the other waves inside of the round logo.
I hope that makes sense?
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I would add G letter into the logo, but it would make the logo more complicated both visually and conceptually.
The idea of the logo is the creative combination of waves and car. So the logo is already meaningful enough and adding G letter would make the logo "too much to think about" for the audience.
However, in order to solve the problem with the empty space on the top and bottom of the car, I added additional waves - making the icon more consistence both visually and conceptually. In other words, the additional waves are simply the "extension" of the existing idea.
I look forward to your feedback.
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In this current version there is a lot of "dead space" above and below the "wave/car"
I wonder if you incorporated that into a "G" some how - how that would look?
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We have you ranked now. We look forward to it!!
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Thanks a lot for the feedback.
Sure, I will submit some options. I will look forward.
Regards,
Arthur
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We are really wanting you in the top 5. I know that you can't submit until we move you into that position but we will be doing that later today.
We really really like your Car/Wave feel. We would like to see what that would look like more in square/round format where it would work well as a favicon, photo/image on social etc.
Could you take what you have done and make it more like a mark with the words "Grow Car Wash" out beside it separate from the mark.
You created a very professional and clean logo. We really like it!
Kyle
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Both versions (#66 and #70) will be available for you