Group CCILogo Design Contest

Please check sir

Hello sir, Is everything okay, sir? Or is there something else missing? If so, please don't hesitate to contact me. Thank you.

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GEMPA

Hi, sir, please check my new revision design And please give me feedback if any shortage. Thank you.

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GEMPA

I apologize in advance, sir. I don't quite understand what you mean (a more solid storm look like some of the other designs I've rated highly, instead of dots.) because we're currently in the Blind phase, where designers can't see other designers' work. And In the finalist phase, designers will be able to see other designers' work.
For now, perhaps you could give me a sense of what you mean by the solid storm look so I understand where you're going? Thank you.

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GEMPA

No something like 355

Thank you for your input. Is this what solid means, sir? #138 Please review. If there are any shortcomings, please feel free to contact me. Thank you :)

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GEMPA

I really like this. I would also like to see it with more of a solid hurricane look like some of the other designs I ranked high instead of the dots.