Hello PonetzGraphics, Thank you for joining the contest. Your entry #59 is very different from any other design I have received to date and for that reason I am interested to see what more you can come up with. I like that you have used lowercase freeform initials. Just to let you know some of the changes or other feedback I have been giving since positing the brief: 1. While I don't mind the block capitals for "GREG ALECKSON" I would ideally like them to be in a slightly softer font than most entries have been using. 2. I have removed "the" from my tagline and I have also asked everyone to separate into 2 phrases "Work Less Earn more" and "Sustainable Profit Strategy". 3. Simple and Unique are 2 key concepts for who I am, what I do and what I want my brand to represent My only other comment for your design is that perhaps with the font and the block colours in the logo it may look a little too much like a pharmaceutical or medical supplies company, but I am definitely intrigued and interested to see more. Thanks again
Hello Lloyd, I like some of the aspects of your revamped design #69, in particular the short slogan and the pink swish underline of "more". I don't think the font for Greg Aleckson works in this instance as it is too soft when taken with the soft font in the logo and it also seems the colours therefore also don't work as well. I still like the block capitals in #59 but would like to see a slightly softer font/style and then the colours may also work. Thanks again.