Hello H2Logo, I really liked how different your logo was to the rest incorporating the G and A in a very unique way. I also really like the colour differentiation and size differentiation between "Greg" and "Aleckson". Your colours and tones were also very good. I really don't think that there are too many things I could critique in your design but I think the reason I ranked you lower than some others was that I feel that the GA logo somehow made me think of CPA or Institute of Chartered Accountants logos...I can't really explain it but because of that and those industries being very conservative, corporate, professional and "cliche'd" I felt the design probably was too "financial" and not "relaxed" which is what I would like my brand to portray. I am sorry I can't explain better but I really do like your design...pretty much everything about it but there was just an overarching "feel" that didn't quite work. I hope you would be interested to continue to work on this with me and I will try to give a little guidance to help. I would really like to somehow incorporate the colour magenta in a subtle way as it softens down the financial and corporate colours of dark blue and grey and gives a more relaxed feel. Apart from being my favourite colour it also appeals to one of my target markets, being female business owners. I would also be interested to see if you could incorporate the brand ideas in this feedback and in my brief into an "image" or "picture" style logo. Also if you would remove "the" from my tagline and separate the tagline into 2 separate phrases. Finally, I would be interested to also see the vertical line/margin removed (?). Thank you so much for your design to date as it is quite amazing even though something which probably has nothing to do with the brief has caused me to just have a "feel" that it just isn't yet somehow "right".
Hello again H2 Logo. I like your new design #35 incorporating the pink/magenta. I also note that you have kept the tagline complete rather than splitting into the 2 separate phrases being "Work Less Earn More" and "Sustainable Profit Strategy", was there any reason for this? I do still really like your initial design #12 but wonder if you might revisit it with the comments here and in my earlier Comment and perhaps by revisiting the brief. This design is very clever and original but I would like to see you play a little with it to perhaps more closely meet what I am looking for. Thank you.
Hi H2 Logo, wow, design #61 is very interesting. I really like it even though it is quite geometric/linear. I would really like to see it with the colours reversed as I think with the G being pink and the A being blue it may actually give a "sunset over water" type feel and this may actually align well with what I do...helping business owners to not have to work as much and also earn even more profit so they can enjoy their lifestyle with family perhaps holidaying. I am still also very interested to see how you could do some more work on #12 your original entry as I still like it...it is only ranked low now because more designs have come through taking into account my feedback so there have been many improved designs since the initial ranking. If you could do something with that design to incorporate some of the feedback above then it could rank highly. Anyway, thank you again for putting another very interesting design forward and I really look forward to seeing more of what you can do.
Hi H2 Logo, your amended design #65 is interesting and I am now wondering whether to lift the ranking of both of these designs as they are really starting to appeal to me. Looking at #65 after reversing the colours, I think that it might look better if the logo was finer like in #61 rather than bold like it currently is. Also, I wonder if you could reverse the colours on Greg and Aleckson (even though the G and Aleckson would be pink while A and Greg would be blue, I would still like to see this as I think it may improve the logo). If you don't mind I would like to keep both the existing designs in the contest. Also, with entry #66 I like the addition of the colour but I think the size of the A now is too big and somehow doesn't really work as well as in #12. The size of the G and the A seemed almost perfect in #12 but perhaps just keep the original font from #12 for the A and enlarge it only slightly and add the colour. Also, I really liked the layout of the text in #12 and the font style of sentence case rather than upper case. I would love to see if you could make some further improvements to both #65 and #66. Thanks again.
Hi H2Logo, Would you please look at your design #61 and do a new design that reverses the colours of the G and the A so the G is pink and the A is blue but this time in the same style, font and size (and not bold) as in #61. Also, I would be interested to see the Greg Aleckson left as it currently is (Greg blue and Aleckson pink). Also if you can remove the "The" from the tagline and then include both tag lines "work less earn more" and "Sustainable Profit Strategy". I would really like to see the new design with all of these comments taken into account. Thanks again.
Hi again H2Logo, Have you reviewed my last comments yet? I would like to add to those comments by also asking you to do another design (in addition to the new design I asked for in my previous comments) to incorporate both tag lines one above the other something like this "Work Less Earn More" "Sustainable Profit Strategy" Thank you very much
Hi H2Logo, are you able to make some revisions to designs #145, #153, #155 to create some new designs as follows: #145 - please make "Greg Aleckson" in sentence case instead of in block capitals #145 - please also make a separate revision by making the entire logo and text in slightly bolder font (not too bold though...maybe not as bold as the logo in #65) #155 - please make the "Greg Aleckson" in larger font or spaced wider and make the taglines in larger font #155 - please make a separate revision with the same as above but also change the "Greg Aleckson" to sentence case instead of block capitals #153 - please reduce the width of both tag lines so they are in line with each other but not as wide as "Greg Aleckson". So I believe that would mean "Work Less Earn More" will be larger font than "Sustainable Profit Strategy" I hope that you can understand these requested changes and that you are happy to make these changes. Thanks you, Greg