Entry #1 Thanks for your entry. Here is feedback from the team members working on this project: Needs different font, different colors and more definition in regards to the character. The colors are too bland and the greetle is disproportionate. The head and face should be significantly larger in order for the facial features to stand out.
What we do like is the .com written on the envelope. While I am sure a greetle does not have arms, I think some should be drawn on in order to hold the piece of mail. I don't like it being held in the greetle's mouth.
Thanks BusinessBuilders for your second entry. The team believes the your Entry #1 is better than Entry #2 The feedback for your original entry should help you in better creating the logo we are looking for. Thanks!
here is another version responding to your requests. I do not promote the style with a lot of gradients to give dimension - mainly because my primary business is promotional products and the requirements for printing on most items is for a solid color simple logo... I also like the primitive / child-like style because it is so simple.