Greenway Wealth AdvisorsLogo Design Contest

Could you please precise why you don't like this concept ?!

Could you please precise why you don't like this concept ?!

I'm interested to know what do you think about this concept !

Hi! There are some other designers that have been able to simplify the logo more. I really like your concepts with the skyline and greenway, but they look more like paintings than logos. Also, other designers have nailed the Charlotte skyline instead of just a random crop of buildings.

Since I'm no longer ranked as 3rd, that means you've taken a new direction in the contest !
Could you please precise it to me because this is a blind contest so i can't see other designers submissions ?!

This is very similar to the concept I had in mind, although the execution of the graphic isn't as clean as I imagined. All in all a good start!!

I'm interested to know what do you think about this concept !

sir! You didn't upload any photo to the contest!
Please re-upload it so i can better understand the idea you have in mind. Thanks!

Thanks for the submission! I like the concept but I would like to have some reference to the greenway itself, as shown in the picture I posted. The pathway borders a creek and capturing the mix of urban and natural is an important part of the effort. Thanks!

Initial concept, any feedback is welcome !