Ultimately, we really like your work, or we wouldn't have ranked one of your designs second. Right now, we're favoring "GreekPAC" on the logo staying on one line (as in the ranked design) as opposed to splitting it into two lines as in this one. The only other minor tweek that could be made is the bottom of the flags in your unranked designs are red, which kind of unaturally conflicts with the blue letters they flow from. In your ranked design, the red "C" in "PAC" gives way to the mostly red American flag. Otherwise, we think your work is doing a fantastic job at conveying the important points we mentioned in the contest description, and like the seamless integration of the two logo styles we said we preferred in the contest. We'd love to see what else you can do.
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let me know if you need a change.
best.
ndaru
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