Entry 32 I like this quite a bit. Could you try this with the words Fitness Inc. in a gold/brown color and do the hand in the same color rather than green. Remove the comma after the word fitness. Try the word Fitness a bit larger and the Inc. can be small. The word fitness needs to be more prominent because Greatest Age by itself sheds no meaning about what the company does.
Then follow the above instructions but with the word Age in blue.
Thank you so much for the rank & feedback.. Please review my designs #44 , #45 & #46 as you request. Hope you love them.... Please let me know if you have any request.
#46 Make the word Fitness Inc. regular rather than bold. Try sliding the words GreatestAge slightly to the left so it is closer to the symbol. Inc. can be cap and lower case if it wraps better around the "g".
Also, keep the words FITNESS INC. in bold but make the face a little smaller. Again, slide the words GreatestAge to the left and it is ok for Inc. to be c&l if that works better
Could you show me these in solid colors rather than graded