Thanks for your idea. I like the colors, italicized font and I like the figure too, I would like the word FITNESS to be more prominent. INC can be very small.
Can you try something for me? Greatest (c&l)- just regular not italic. Age (c&l) - a scroll font of some sort that is nice to look at but not frilly and not too sophisticated, but dignified. Make Age be blue (softer and dignified) and Greatest be black(strong and powerful). Try FITNESS (all caps) in a warm orange/brown and INC (all caps) very small in black.
Just play with the type and forget the figure for now. The scroll font might provide the visual interest and take the place of the figure.