Thanks for showing me some ideas for my logo. Here's some feedback. I would like the whole effect to be more bold. How about making Greatest in black. Could you play around with bold face type too? Try Fitness in green. Try removing the space between Greatest and Age.
Do you have another idea for the figure? Something that is not so feminine.
I would like to have the Inc. in there too - it can be much smaller than the word fitness. I think I like the blue, green and black combination of colors but feel free to show additional ideas.