#1: spacing and overall shape too clunky. Want sophisitcated and warmly strong
#2: The S is too much like a tentacle, and shares the spacing problems of #1.
#3: Green/earthy colors not preferred. Good strong contrast, please. The spatial relationship of the text and more understated flourish are much closer to what I am looking for.
#20 is my favorite of your entries so far. I would like to see somewhat bolder colors. The font is a little extreme, and I'm not sure the spine shaped flourish is really what I'm after. I think the desgin element of "works" being in the logo color is really good. Prefer warmer color, a warmer blue, even....a little closer to the purple spectrum.
Hi, that flourish in #21 doesn't appeal to me at all. I think it departs too much from what was appealing in #20. Not sure the font is an improvment, either. Maybe a little more fun and strong, not quite so fancy.... Thank you for being so responsive to this!
That tree is a little too tall. I would point you to the Great Works Regional Land Trust wed site for a great eastern white pine silhouette. #78 is much closer to what I am looking for.
#82 Much more representative of the type of tree we were interested in. Not sure about the orange on blue. Also, really looking at less is more...please refine and minimize if possible. Thanks!
Thanks for all the feedback.. plz check my latest revised entries #130, #131 and #132 Let me know the colors you want, here green used in tree and blue to depict water/river at the bottom of the tree..open to more changes, if you need.
132 is my favorite. I wonder if a black background might help it pop....the blue on blue is low contrast, and I really am looking for eye catching high contrast. What about silhoutte only for the tree? Maybe ties to the text in some way....? More stylized perhaps?
Oh, one last thing: if that tree is a direct borrow from Great Works Regional Land trsut, they are in the same town as us, and it will have to be different in an appreciable way.
The picture of the Great Works Regional Land trust is so small so copy from there.. I have drawn it myself.. the white pine trees look like this way. Plz check #151.. let me know your views..
Good, just making sure. I like where you have gone with this. I think the light green for the tree silhoutte looks strange since the trunk is not colored naturally....almost better to make the silhoutte black in a blue circle, or something like that to emphasize it IS a silhouette. I'm not sure a blue circle would look right, I'm just throwing out an idea to illustrate my impression. Hope this gives you something to go on!
Oh, yeah. I like the progress in #161 and #160. I think the font is a little too leggy. I like the font from #151 best. I have to go read what this next phase is all about. Will rank momentarily.
Awesome. Could I see the style of #184 in the color of #180? This is going to be hard...I will review all, and ask for any revisions if I feel I need them tomorrow. Thank you!
Would like to see yellow and yellow-gold for #182 and #183. Prefer Chiropractic in white rather than muted. Maybe shrink it just SLIGHTLY so it doesn't look like it's larger than Great Works. I seems to be doing that even though it technically lines up.
Hi, my partnet really loves the cirle on the left connected to the line between the textual elements. We were wondering if it would be possible to see another image in there? We have used river, mountain, trees, family and moon and sun as themes for our fairly overcrowded old logo. Any one or two of those to carry through the business identity would probably be great instead of an abstract symbol of some kind. If you can, we would like to see one or two different silhoutte concepts before final judging. Thank you!