Great Commission ChurchLogo Design Contest

Thank you very much for your feedback.
please check my entries #420, #421

Here's some feedback about the logos... I definitely think we're going to pick one of yours and here's some adjustments that might help.


Consider adjusting the point sizes to establish a more balanced and softer visual hierarchy.
Great Commission (GC): Reduce the point size by 2-3 levels to ease the visual impact. It should be prominent but not overwhelming.
Church: Reduce the point size further than GC, but still maintain legibility. It should feel subordinate to GC, helping to create a soft contrast between the two elements.
 
Softening the Tone -
Ensure that spacing between letters and lines isn’t too tight. Slightly increasing letter spacing (tracking) can add to the sense of softness and openness.
Shorten the Lines on each side of Church to mirror that of the point size and spacing
By making these adjustments, the design should achieve a softer, more approachable tone while still conveying clarity and emphasis where needed.

Please give me feedback and guide me. Thanks

is it like this ?

thanks for your feedback.
please check my entries #399 #400

Can you tweak the colors? The points on the side are neat. Can you play with them? Make them pass each other to almost hug the globe or make them line up and point to each other.

Love it!

More / different fonts and colors would be nice. :)

is it like this ?

Can you submit with different colors? Teal & blue colors?