Grand LivingLogo Design Contest

critic are welcome, thank you

(This comment references Entry #1)

WYN, thank you for your initial submission. I am looking for more complexity in the text and a font that is more classical. Overall, too modern looking. I'm looking for more classical.

Thank you very much

(This comment references Entry #2)

Wyn, I like your creativity of #2. You have a great idea in communicating we're a house based business. Can we make the swirlies a bit more feminine? I would like to see the "Living" be more prominent. I like your idea of the door/window. can you make that feature more elegant?

Thank you.

#9 Looks fantastic. I'll let you know if i have some more ideas. Thank you!

#12-14 nice idea. Too much emphasis on the house and the font needs to be more elegant.

Thank you WYN

Can we see #79 without the little butterflies/swirlies in the middle, it seems a little too crowded/complex

Thanks for all your ideas Wyn!

you are welcome, goodluck

(This comment references Entry #86)

#87 is really nice now. Can we see it with just one roof top please.

Thanks!

on #97, can we see the font of GRAND a just a bit fatter/bigger so it stands out just a bit more? Everything else the same, left in gold.

And could we also see a second version (with those changes) but this time with the LIVING in white?

Thanks!

Dear Protea Companies,
My opologgize for late update, yes i do can make the change, but only rank 1 can submit revisions in judging mode, you can make switch for 1st place to get more revisions. Thank you. Goodluck!