Golden Rule PoolLogo Design Contest

I really like your designs. Would it b possible to change the black background to white? i have white work trucks this logo will be going on.

gold/yellow doesn't show up that well on white so maybe a black outline around the lettering

kind regards
john

Dear CH,
Many thanks for your feedback, it's really helped me.
and I've updated my logo at Entry #7, Entry #8 and Entry #9.
Just let me know if I have not revise logo according to your expectations, I'll revised it again.

Best Regards,
makinson

thank you for your help

can you make the lettering gold/yellow and outline the letters in black? On entry #2

i like #10 i would like to see 'Golden Rule" on the same line 'Pool" can be on the same line or beneath....i will let you see what looks best

also can you outline the golden rule in blue instead of black i would like to see it brighter

Many thanks,
I'll revise my logo ASAP after I arrive at home.

Makinson

i like #35 very much

can you make the logo smaller and the words larger

also can you put the logp and the "GoldenRule Pool" on the same line and can you make one with .com just so i can see it visually

thank you again
john

Dear CH,
before, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2013,
and I am ready to work again on your contest.