HI Fracco
thanks for your design!
just some feedback for you:
we want the image to say 'sophisticated wine for sophisticated women' without saying so with words.
so no tagline please.
we didnt imagine this style, we were picturing something more classical.
We feel this is aimed at a younger market- not 30 year old women.
if cartoony is your style, we then would like something that is irreverent and funny.
thanks again. and we look forward to you what you submit next