GoddessLogo Design Contest

Hi Fgrafic

thankyou for your entry.
I am liking this, but I dont think this will actually appeal to women.
It is a little bit crass. I know we said use the female form, but its needs to be appealing to women, and not men.
Also the font you have used for Goddess, i think that could be a little more fancy. Reflecting curves and smooth lines you have going on in the image.

thankyou

Hi pirateking
is my first entry. To have a creative base.
I look for new alternatives for you.
thanks for commenting.
Sincerely fgrafic

HI Fgrafic
i am liking this a lot more. as you will see, i have ranked them.
the font is great, much better suited.
And the woman figure is also good.

the only thing id have to say, is that im not sure about the red box... i think the layout could be a little more creative.
a little more interaction between the text and the figure.

great work.

thanks

Hi pirateking
Thank you very much for the comments:
I will work to get the result you want.
best regards
fgrafic

Hi fgrafic

thanks for coming back with some more designs.
I think we are getting there.
I am liking entry number 15. I like how you have made the figure bigger.

the only other thing i would say, can you please give another option using a different font?
just so we can see what it would look like.

thanks

one more thing:

can you try a different pose?
we really like your style of illustration, but would like the imagery to be a bit more positive.
She looks sad. We'd like her to be confident. She can be relaxing, but just not looking down.
Can she smile?

thankyou

hi pirateking
ok! I'm working on it.
thanks for your comments
best regards

hello:
I introduce new designs.
These were created according to suggestions !!!
thanks
best regards
fgrafic

thanks Fgrafic!

looking very sexy! #69

just a couple of things, can you tilt her face upwards, to we can see her features?
perhaps a smile?

and regarding #69
can you please look at changing the colours to
silver, creme and gold.

I know this might look boring, but its what ive been told to tell you to see if it can work.
The all the other colours are still in contention (and look great) we just want to see what it would look like using these colours.

thanks

Hi pirateking
Ok !! thanks!!
I will work on suggestions...
Thank you very much for the cometary

best regards

Also, if i can just ask this:
are you able to close her legs a bit, its just a bit too provocative...
or perhaps put some underwear on her...

thanks