thanks for your design entry. this is a nice design, but can you jazz it up a bit. Make it more interesting, more movement. Maybe a curvy scripty font.. I like the lips, but can you interact them better with the text... perhaps put them in a shape? As it is, it looks like the two elements (lips and text) are just floating on the page. Can you bring the together as one,
Hi there, I just want to let you know that although you are ranked down the order, your concept is getting growing support. The fact that your idea stands out from all the others is a plus. Initially the feeling was that this wasn't original, but this sentiment is possibly turning around. If you have any other ideas with a similar sense of drama and simplicity they would be welcome!