hello there..
thanks for the feedback, i will modified later until find perfect logo you looking for,
little tips for courage the participant, dont worry to click "thanks, but we prefer other designs" the designer not offended by this, give the designer many feedback, rearranged rank, all this will give designer other idea to submit more and more entries, also usually in LT on many designer submitted their design on minute last.
maybe not me, but this will be find logo what you looking for from other designer. i hope you success for your logo.. thanks..
best regards,
---9ine---