The green and orange is a bit pumpkin color. The orange stands out....maybe the green could be more bright and less leafy in color. However, I'll wait to see what happens. You may want to change the color to other variations or adjust. I think this would look great on a shirt or website.
I think it is great that you have included both box and horizontal form. My logo will need to look great in square, horizontal and vertical formats. So everyone needs to provide these variations in the final stages.
i like the green on #13 by donals siringoringo. I like your original orange better. Also the words in #13 are good. I like your GP with the globe better.
Zelda, entry #33 looks really good but please give me a version of it with white background and black background to see the difference. Also try making the globe and funnel a bit larger in proportion.
looks stylish, elegant and uncluttered, with the black background as it did with the white. Also the 'horizon' appears to give the world a lift for the 'spin-off' as in it adds almost like a bounce from a trampoline, which looks cool. There needs to be a slightly bigger gap between the wording and the 'spinning world' because the wording looks slightly squashed at the upper edges of the words (or the font has the appearance that it is flat at the top and needs not to appear to be cut off. The word marketing, should be more white than grey because now it has a black background so it the white will create a balance of the color combination and stand out better. Once these minor adjustments are made and the diagram and wordings are in proportion, the image should be placed at equal points in the centre of the space, for balance/harmony. Our team has looked at all the logos and almost 8 out of 10 like your creation so far. But it needs to be adjusted and cleaned up in these areas. Thank you Zelda for staying in the contest. You were the first to submit an entry.
Zelda please make the font (wording) stand out more clearly. Please make the words crisp and clean. They appear to be lost. We are seriously considering your design but we are getting concerns about the clarity of the wording. Thank you.
#84 ranked 1st (when on black background) needs the word "Prosperity" in white lettering. The grey is too dull. The words in your #32 was much better for us. The "GLOBAL PROSPERITY" was also brighter and larger. Try to get the words to stand out stronger. We like the way you stretched the word "MARKETING" across the bottom in #84