I like the boldness and the gold curve can we play with the gold colour make it something inbetween both your entries and a bit more sparkle. How about trying a sillouhette behind the logo of a sexy woman and making the curve into gold dust
could we try having the glitter falling down around the women figure (so it looks like she is getting a tan) and maybe try having the woman lying on top of the logo?
Thanks its looking good can you see if you can make the woman lying on her tummy with her legs bent up as if she was laying in the sun ? and take away the sun curve and stick with the bold sparkle lettering? also try her in a bikini maybe