Wow! This is cool! Exactly more of what I'm looking for. Thank you for submitting this and taking time to listen to what I wanted. One thing...can you make the "surfboard" in "I" in Girls bigger? I really like this logo...
#30 looks better! But why are the tree leaves smaller? (1) Pls. keep it big like it was in #24. I really like the palm tree. Good that the surfboard is bigger (but it kinda looks like a leaf). (2) Do you think if we make it straighter as opposed to being slanted it will stand out more as a surfboard?(3) Also...any chance that you could do a yoga pose silhouette somewhere? Also I'd like to see if the slogan changed to "Fit Adventures in Paradise" to take away from it implying that it's some sort of wild adventure that's sexual in nature since it isn't. So the fonts for #30 and 24 are better than #29 and #23. Thanks!
Hi did you receive this. I edited my comment below: #30 looks better! But why are the tree leaves smaller? (1) Pls. keep it big like it was in #24. I really like the palm tree. Good that the surfboard is bigger (but it kinda looks like a leaf). (2) Do you think if we make it straighter as opposed to being slanted it will stand out more as a surfboard?(3) Also...any chance that you could do a yoga pose silhouette somewhere? Maybe in light blue? It can be any yoga pose except tree pose. Also I'd like to see if the slogan changed to "Fit Adventures in Paradise" to take away from it implying that it's some sort of wild adventure that's sexual in nature since it isn't. So the fonts for #30 and #24 are better than #29 and #23. Thanks!
Two new logos added are great! Sorry...didn't see these new additions. Give me a minute or two. I see the pose is inside the "O". Cool! So disregard my previous comment above for now since you did the edits already.
Okay. Got it. I like the way you shaved the "O" to make it more like a circle in #31. Is there any way we can make it bigger so that the yoga pose stands out more?
Also if you can change the surfboard to be more an outline or something that looks like a surfboard more than a leaf. A couple of my friends have commented it doesn't look like a surfboard. Thanks!
I'm making #32 ranking number one right now but I need you to make a few changes: 1) Make the "O" way bigger so the yoga pose shows more. I prefer this type of "O" now instead of my previous perfect circle "O".
2) Remove the fins/rudder on surfboard and instead put a tropical flower design in the middle so it looks like a surfboard. I also prefer the "grey-red-yellow" order of font color like the one on #32 versus the newer ones you did.
I am really excited about this! Pls. let me know when you've done the changes.