First, thank you so much for taking the time to submit.
We love the fact that you used a metaphor and it is extremely different. I think the cursive font and the warm colors in combination with the phoenix comes across a little too feminine though.
Hi, thanks for the feedback, it does greatly help the process along! - keep it coming ... I've changed the type face and altered the colour slightly here.
I don't think the overall look is really working after seeing a couple of those changes. We like the idea of the phoenix, but we do not like the flames underneath, the colors and font still aren't working. There is actually a font that we have in mind, i will have to track down the name, so I will do that this morning and get back to you.