because we on selection phase only 1st rank can make revision.
if you want me to make revision just raise up my rank and I will HELP you to make revision. and if you don't like it you can down my rank again.
revision
- more focus on beam shoot
- text easy to read with the crack fx
- eclipse touch on background character fly on astrology symbol that you teach
what you thing? am I in right direction?
I do actually prefer the way the numbers come off the letters in the other design as well, looks alright with the blue numbers against the white background
Hello,
For the primary logo I could be a bit smaller. Also the numbers should reflect the letters, so 7-5-13-1-20-18-9-14-1-20-15-18. I should have been more specific!
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if you want me to make revision just raise up my rank and I will HELP you to make revision. and if you don't like it you can down my rank again.
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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- more focus on beam shoot
- text easy to read with the crack fx
- eclipse touch on background character fly on astrology symbol that you teach
what you thing? am I in right direction?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check my final shoot on entry #78
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what do you thing?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check my new entry on #69
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what do you thing?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check my alternative on #43
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the character little bit smaller
the number code jump out from each letter
any other suggestion?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please check your request base on entry #20
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For the primary logo I could be a bit smaller. Also the numbers should reflect the letters, so 7-5-13-1-20-18-9-14-1-20-15-18. I should have been more specific!
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tilt the character to make it more dynamic and alternative fulse on text to bring numeric fx.
what do you thing?
any suggestion?
best rgd, mbahdjoyo
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please take a look my alternative entry on #19
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
best rgd, mbahdjoyo