This capital G, can you make the bottom half of it have a similar angle and loop to make it more cohesive with the other letters? It might be a little too wide or sticking out too far to the left? Or you could adjust the other letters to match the slant and loop of the new G.
Different variations with different mountains, I was thinking maybe a mountain made of scoops of ice cream instead of swirls? And the bottom half of the circle the dark teal.
I´ve submited revisions, please check and let me know your thoughts. Personal opinion i think te swoosh should stay, gives dynamic to the brand. I´ve also submited one design with a fancier "G" so you can compare with the others.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Sorry, I didn't realize that I shouldn't be asking you to mimic any other designers elements. I guess what I'm asking is a slightly fancier, capital cursive G. My graphic designer friend said there are too many elements in the design, not sure how that could change aside from maybe removing the stars? I'm certainly not a graphic designer so I have no idea how logos "should" look.
His suggestions are to remove the swoop under the lettering. (Or I think maybe to have the swoop behind the lettering instead of in front?) Make the the whole circle the same color as the lettering. He did also say that the mountain looks a little bit like the "poop emoji".....definitely not what I want people to think of. I hope that isn't too much feedback. Please let me know what you come up with.
Yes sure i can, please check bellow:
- #302 - more subtle "G"
- #303 - With the subtle heart on the "G" with the meaning "i love ice cream", i thought it could be a could hidden message in the logo
These lettering updates have small manipulation made by me what will make them unique.
Let me know your thoughts on the new "G" option. If you need anything else just let me know please.
Just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed, feel free.
I appreciate your updates. I´ve contacted the designer and he allowed me to use those exact colors, so it´s ok, please check bellow and let me know your thoughts, i work 2 options with background in the emblem so you can compare: #291 | #292 | #293
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else please.
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Submited revisions so you can compare.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
Joao
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Different variations with different mountains, I was thinking maybe a mountain made of scoops of ice cream instead of swirls? And the bottom half of the circle the dark teal.
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Thanks for the suggestions. Please check revisions bellow:
- #327 | #328
As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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I appreciate your feedback, and no problem.
I´ve submited revisions, please check and let me know your thoughts. Personal opinion i think te swoosh should stay, gives dynamic to the brand. I´ve also submited one design with a fancier "G" so you can compare with the others.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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His suggestions are to remove the swoop under the lettering. (Or I think maybe to have the swoop behind the lettering instead of in front?) Make the the whole circle the same color as the lettering. He did also say that the mountain looks a little bit like the "poop emoji".....definitely not what I want people to think of. I hope that isn't too much feedback. Please let me know what you come up with.
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I appreciate your feedback again.
Yes sure i can, please check bellow:
- #302 - more subtle "G"
- #303 - With the subtle heart on the "G" with the meaning "i love ice cream", i thought it could be a could hidden message in the logo
These lettering updates have small manipulation made by me what will make them unique.
Let me know your thoughts on the new "G" option. If you need anything else just let me know please.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on more revisions if needed, feel free.
I will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I appreciate your updates. I´ve contacted the designer and he allowed me to use those exact colors, so it´s ok, please check bellow and let me know your thoughts, i work 2 options with background in the emblem so you can compare:
#291 | #292 | #293
As always feel free to ask if you need anything else please.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Thank you for your feedback.
Yes i´m using already teal color, but i´ve submited a few variations with similar pantone:
#223 | #226
Just in case, if you really want a specific pantone, does it help if i leave the pantone color chart bellow so you can check, you just need to send me the reference and i will do it for your:
- https://www.pantone.com/color-finder#/pick?pantoneBook=pantoneSolidCoatedV3M2
If you need anything else just let me know Sheena.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re having a great weekend.
I´m glad you like my logo concept.
If you need changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João