As Promised, as one of our Top 5 I am commenting to each of you with the following points:- 1. Font Type - Modern and Fresh but not too gamesy. We are working in the Coporate World. 2. The edging of the icon should be modern, smooth 3. Colours - We really need to create real excitement and impact, we would appreciate your expertise by experiementing with the colours in order for the logo to reflect excitement and help Gavurin as a company stand out from the crowd. We do not mean 'Shocking' but if the colours could reflect some vibrancy. 4. "Exciting Data" is the clients take out, so we need it to clear and visible, examples like - Nike (Just do it), Avis (We Try Harder), Nokia (Connecting People0, Tesco (Every Little Helps)
Thanks for feedback and opportunity in top 5. I am submit new designs : - #213 #214 #215 #216 : with different color combination reflect vibrancy - #217 #218 #219 : with another font represent corporate I am still working in your contest, I will be update my proposal as soon as possible. If any revision don't hesitate to tell me.
Your initial designs of #102 and #210 have the line under the Company Name, could you do this with #215 and #218, and use the font in #222. as i think several of the elements from each of these may work better, for what we are looking for, also can you try and think of a way of emphasising "Exciting Data".
We are discussing the logo and we really like the shadowing e.g. #100 and #78 under the G, it is more prominent and also the shadowing of the line inbetween the Gavurin & Exciting Data the gradiuation of the shadowing is better in our view. The other option maybe to align "Exciting Data" to the Right with a dash before it
I am update my entry : #231 and #232 : G in line with Gavurin #233 #234 #235 #236 #237 : Gavurin Exciting Data in one line #238 #239 : wording color use platinum and titanium color If any revision, don't hesitate to tell me
I update my entry, sorry for this delay. I am now in airport waiting take off go to my city. I try best before I am take off, also my laptop is low batt. I will updta emy entry as soon as possible. Update : #248 #249 and #250 : combination parllette no. 3 #247 #246 : combination parllette no. 11 #245 #251 : combination parllette no. 12 #244 #243 : combination parllette 12 and 3 I am still working in your contest, I will be update after I am arrive in my city, to get best way to emphasis "exciting data"
I am submit variation to emphasis "exciting data" with flat color and color base on #237 update for layout: #261 #262 #263 #264 #265 #266 #267 #268 #269 #270 If you don't mind my suggetion is #268 and #269 for lay out and for the color in "G" symbol is #251 #249 #244.
I think, first you can choose the lay out, after that you can the color combination from parllette no.3, 11, and 12 (use my previous update). After you choose all of them, I can combine the layout and color in one design. If I make all the alternative, I worry that make you confuse because too many option. I hope my suggestion can be accepted.
The concept of #232 we really like as a stand alone, could we try that in the Company fonts you were given, and could we flatten (not so 3D) the G Icon and provide it in the colours of the specific pallettes that I am listing below:
Regarding #264 which we also really like, the font needs to be larger, the G Icon a little less 3D and also could we not have the points touching around the G. Also using the colours suggested as listed below.
From the website I gave you please look at the following for the colours (we are open to Two tone as well as flat colours) we leave this to your expertise.
Blues (Pallette 3, 6, 9 and 21) Pinks/Purples (Pallette 12, 13, 25 and 49) Silvers/Greys (Pallette 15, 37, 46 and 49)
Here is the update : Base on #264 : - flat design - remove pointing around teh G - use colours in specific palettes With shadow in the bottom : #282 #283 #284 and #285 without shadow in the bottom : #286 #287 #288 (combination of colors can be customized with a design that you choose)
Base on #232 : - G stand alone - use variation of fonts - flat design - use colours in specific palettes #296 #297# 298 #299 #300 #301 #302 (combination colours and font can be customized with a design that you choose)
Here is the update : G incorporated in Gavurin #304 #305 #306 = with shadow in the bottom #307 #308 #309 #310 #311 = without shadow in the bottom #312 #313 #314 #315 = base on #232 with company fonts #316 #317 #318 = with customize fonts If any revision for colours combination don't hesitate to tell me.
Size of #316 and the same font as #316 Using the Icon of #315 For the Icon LOGO using the colours of #300 However keep text colour of #315 Can we put the dot on the i in the pink
Here is the revision #328 with : Size of #316 and the same font as #316 Using the Icon of #315 For the Icon LOGO using the colours of #300 However keep text colour of #315 Can we put the dot on the i in the pink
and #327 with : Size of #316 and the same font as #316 Using the Icon of #315 For the Icon LOGO using the same colours #315 ** However keep text colour of #315 Can we put the dot on the i in the pink
We like design # 327. Can we change the line seperating Gavurin & exciting data to the pink. Also can we change the purple colouring on the "G" to the same colouring as the wording "Exciting Data" please
#346 we really like the colours, however, could you please use the same shading of Blue as you have in #327 as it looks a little darker.
Once you have done these changes, please note, we have ranked you as the winner for the judging on the basis that we need a little more work on the "G" logo section we overall like the theme of it, but it still doesnt quite yell out Technology "WOW"
We evisage using the "G" Icon as a stand alone image for embedding into our Software Reports and mapping etc.. Note that when we state mapping the logo itself will be embedded into a google map, so it needs to stand out.
In addition we would like the market to identify Gavurin with the "G" Icon, not only the full logo. BRANDING Purposes, if you need any further information or if we can send anything that will assist you, please let me know.
If it helps please look at our other logo, which is one of our other brands, the website is www.preci.co.uk, this may give you an idea of what we are hoping the "G" COULD resemble.
update : #349 with blue like #327 Thanks for your opportunity in judging phase. I am working on G make more stand out, I hope next update will be according with your expectation. if I need any information I will tell you.
#360 I think this looks good, but the G is just to big and maybe on a slant a little too much #349 I was wondering if maybe the G was the grey with the lines blue and pink, would that maybe make the "G" stand out a little more, I think the G does not have the WOW factor because it is the same colour as the rest of the company name.
Could you try these suggestions for me please Claire
Sorry for late respond, electricity in my district is down. Here is the update : #364 and #365
For #363 I didn't get your point of "can we give it more definition/structure" ? Sorry again my english is not good enough. I hope you understand this situation. :)
I am submit new version of #264 and #366 #367 : G with style like perci logo #368 and #369 : G symbol style like perci logo #370 and #371 : detail G symbol
A few changes please:- 1. Can we incorporate the logo #373 into #368
2. Once you have completed Point 1. we decided that we may need to have the full name company name "gavurin" back in the logo, so can you do Logo and then the word "gavurin" and "Gavurin" we would like to see the company name in lowercase and with a Capital G. (the layout you did in #302 etc..) Sorry for all the changes, but I really think we are nearly there.
So we are looking at 3 new submission
Point 1 Point 1 with Logo and then the full company name "gavurin" (lowercase g) Point 1 with Logo and then the full company name "Gavurin" (Uppercase G)
I am leaving my office in 4 hours and I really want to try end this competition on Monday so that you can be paid, can you let me know when you have read the message I sent you this morning.
Here is the update : - #378 : Point 1 - #374 and #376 : Point 1 with Logo and then the full company name "gavurin" (lowercase g) - #375 and #377 : Point 1 with Logo and then the full company name "Gavurin" (Uppercase G) I made 2 version in lower case and 2 version capital G (with customize Ronda font and combining font)
Thank you so much for the changes, it looks good. I am going to speak with the rest of the team for any comments.
I would like to ask in advance about the formats of the logo, would you be able to send them in different formats if we requested? Also would you also be willing to send the full logo and the "G" logo on its own.
I hope you child is feeling better. Could you try one last think for us please.
#380 can you change the word exciting data into the same colour pink as the dot on the i and also put a grey line between Gavurin and exciting data instead of the pink line.
I am pleased your child is getting better, I understand what it is like as I have a 10 yr old son. Could you please do the icon from #380 on its own please. I just want to look at the logo without the wording as I think this is my favourite.