Thank you very much for submitting this design. This is a one-of-a kind approach that has not been replicated thus far. It capture the organic look with synergy and progressive style.
That being said, could you maybe try something other than people figures as the ends of the loop in the icon? It makes it look like we are a scholastic or humanitarian organization of some sort. We like the "loop" look though so maybe you could try a loop with ends that taper off to a gradient or with dots dissolving or something? We just need something that symbolizes technology or future thought a bit better ....
Per executive decisions, it was decided that #111 and #112 are not our favorites. We will be providing feedback on #113 and #114 though ... we like those designs better.
#333 and #334 are great - I just want to make sure these are in the 'Gulim' font. It is close enough that it is a bit hard to tell ....
Then, for these designs we need the wordmark/text for the FPOV and Future Point of View versions to be Emerald Green, not black. We also need the wordmark/text for the TMI and Technology Mastery Institute versions to be the Solar Energy Yellow, not black.
Can you please submit #341 with yellow text for the words instead of blue? Apply a thin black shadow outline behind the text if you need to to make it stand out ...
Cool idea on #371 and #372 .... can you make the white space "stripe" wrap around a bit more as it cuts in to the shape? It looks a bit too much like the Nike "Swoosh" symbol right now ....
For #373 and #342, can you submit versions that have no grey in the icon? Just replace the grey with the respective color that it trails off of. Also, following #342, please submit another SEPARATE version with the large FPOV letters and stacked text next to it: Future Point (1st line), of View (2nd line). We just want to see what that would look like ...
Finally, can you submit one more version of the icon by itself that has three stripes instead of two with (Green-Yellow-Blue)?