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Thank you for all comments, feedback and inputs so far.
Unfortunately, here the winner takes it all :) The second ranked designer doesn't get any compensation.
Hi,
Can you tell us how much the first place person gets and how much the second place person gets also? We are torn between your logo and the 2nd place logo right now. We have polled our employees, our kids, friends and family and it is pretty split between your logo and the 2nd place one. We are still deciding, but we want to make sure the 2nd place person gets paid well also because both of you have worked so hard and done such great work. Let me know. Thanks so much! You have done awesome work!
Looks good, can you put this one on a white background, please keep the text at the bottom where it is, but please change it to the font that we have on #365 and can you twist the bigger hand counter-clockwise more so his hand isn't as much in the "thumbs-up" position but is on more of an angle (rotating it counter-clockwise). Thanks!
This looks great. Can you show us this same version but the bigger hand (the one on the right side of the picture), can you tilt the hand more to be more flat (so the thumb and the pinky are sticking out to the sides and the three middle fingers are on the top)(sorry, that is kind of hard to explain). Also, can you make his legs a little bulkier so he looks a little tougher and not have the little stick-type legs?
Looking great!
No problem.
Just a question to make sure - do you want hands to be in a position like #191 or like in this #349 ?
Thank you for great comments and good guiding through the contest.
Hi Bomba, You are doing awesome work. Thanks for making all of these little adjustments for us. I think we are getting closer. Can you do a few more tweaks and do the following to this image here (#349):
-Can you give us another version of this guy and this font but change the layout to look like your image #191. We want all of the same colors and everything from image #349, but let's see what it looks like if we only see the sun guy's face and hands out (like image #191)(so no legs or feet) and the "Fun Squad" text at the bottom (like image #191).
Thanks!
To be clear, we want the hands like the first place character submission orientation - with the thumbs to the side or tilting up- close to what you just submitted.
4) Thicken up the sunstroke hair that was marked.
5) Can you check out the font from "Fortnight" and see if you can match up to that font a little bit more.
6) To be clear - we like this submissions face and hair the best.
7) Try putting this face on the body you just submitted with extended arms and legs.
8) We like the character above the text "Fun Squad" the Best.
4) Thicken up the sunstroke hair that was marked.
5) Can you check out the font from "Fortnight" and see if you can match up to that font a little bit more.
Sarah here: Thanks for all your ongoing revisions. We really appreciate the effort. We have asked about 60 of our close friends/fam to vote on their favorite character and yours is winning so far! We'd like to request the following revisions to this version above #231:
1) Some people felt like the thumbs facing the ground meant a thumbs down instead of the shaka. Can we reverse the direction of the hands and see a little bit of arm extending from the character? Make the shaka a little bit bigger and higher.
2) Turn the foot down - like in the other versions you had (see #303)
3)Lighten this one's face only a little bit more like you did to #
We like this character but we still feel like he looks too much like sonic. Do you have suggestions on how we can make changes? What can we change in the mouth, snout/cheek area?
Eyes slightly more adjusted.
Different sneakers color.
Let me know which face expression do you like the best and if there are any other corrections you would like to see regarding eyes or other face features.
Here are few options on various backgrounds #231#229 and #228
Logo is usable on any king of background because it has outline, which makes it adjustable to the white, colorful, dark or transparent background.
Sarah here: This hair is also cool. Face is good - interesting expression in the eye. I think the other face is my favorite, but I'd like to also see this expression with they eye color placement on the Right eye moved to the right a little bit. And losing the cheek bone on the face. See mark-up for reference.
Sarah: #195 face is my favorite - with the lighter face, etc. Can you try sending these latest variations with that face? I appreciate seeing the character in different positions next to text and standing alone.
Sarah here: This face is really great. It's youthful and fun. I like the font, hair, face. Great job! I'm unsure of the shoe. My husband, Brandon, gets back in town tomorrow. He's been in the mountains without internet. He will weigh-in tomorrow.
Can you send me this same version of the character on the colors: red, yellow, green, purple? It would be great to see how this logo fares on a variety of colored backdrops or on t-shirt colors. Thanks!
A bit different face and sun rays.
Font is positioned so every element can be seen without loosing either the character features or making the name too small or not readable enough.
Colors on the face are lighter.
Any element can be taken out so it is easily adjustable.
Here is option with legs.
I changed the nose, so it doesn't resemble Sonic.
Let me know what you think about this option, or if you prefer name being below the character.
Personally, I think this option is giving the whole logo more dynamic feel.
Any adjustment or combination with font is possible.
Hi Bob, this is Sarah the client. We are afraid that your character looks too much like Sonic. Can you vary the face? We're going for a teen "cool guy" look where the character is excited and mischevious. As if the character were about to pull a funny prank on his friend. Sun glasses might look cool on the forehead.
We like your design. It's really fun. I like the variation of colors in the run rays. The darker glasses are also a plus. This smile is better than the others you submitted. White hands are great. We are a little worrid that he looks a little bit too much like sonic. Can you submit a face variation that changes it up just a little more? Can you also try making the sun rays/hair vary in length and direction?
This is looking good. Can you soften the angles of the sun rays (hair) so they are curvy and not chunky? Also modify the q so it doesn’t draw so much attention to it.
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Let me know if you would like to see any adjustments regarding either character or font.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.
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if you need any other adjustment or pose of the character, just let me know and I will adjust.
It's a great pleasure working with both of you on development of this logo.
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Thank you for all comments, feedback and inputs so far.
Unfortunately, here the winner takes it all :) The second ranked designer doesn't get any compensation.
Looking forward to your final decision.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Can you tell us how much the first place person gets and how much the second place person gets also? We are torn between your logo and the 2nd place logo right now. We have polled our employees, our kids, friends and family and it is pretty split between your logo and the 2nd place one. We are still deciding, but we want to make sure the 2nd place person gets paid well also because both of you have worked so hard and done such great work. Let me know. Thanks so much! You have done awesome work!
Whichever option or tweak you need, just let me know.
Kind regard,
Bob.
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#368 with adjusted hand and font
#369 on a white background.
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
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Here it is adjusted.
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Looking great!
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few combinations of hands and font variations.
Let me know if these are what you had in mind.
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Just a question to make sure - do you want hands to be in a position like #191 or like in this #349 ?
Thank you for great comments and good guiding through the contest.
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-Can you give us another version of this guy and this font but change the layout to look like your image #191. We want all of the same colors and everything from image #349, but let's see what it looks like if we only see the sun guy's face and hands out (like image #191)(so no legs or feet) and the "Fun Squad" text at the bottom (like image #191).
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To see how it looks isolated.
Let me know if you would like to see any adjustments.
Kind regardes,
Bob.
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Let me know if you prefer them here or in #339
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As opposed to #340 where I put hand in the position as it was in first ranked design only reversed with the thumbs up.
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or in one line below the character as in eg. #342
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#339 #340 #341 #342 #343
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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5) Can you check out the font from "Fortnight" and see if you can match up to that font a little bit more.
6) To be clear - we like this submissions face and hair the best.
7) Try putting this face on the body you just submitted with extended arms and legs.
8) We like the character above the text "Fun Squad" the Best.
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5) Can you check out the font from "Fortnight" and see if you can match up to that font a little bit more.
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1) Some people felt like the thumbs facing the ground meant a thumbs down instead of the shaka. Can we reverse the direction of the hands and see a little bit of arm extending from the character? Make the shaka a little bit bigger and higher.
2) Turn the foot down - like in the other versions you had (see #303)
3)Lighten this one's face only a little bit more like you did to #
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Here are few adjustments to the face and the font.
Let me know if you have any suggestions.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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could be transformed into skate if you prefer that concept better.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Different sneakers color.
Let me know which face expression do you like the best and if there are any other corrections you would like to see regarding eyes or other face features.
Thank you.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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I adjusted the sneaker a bit. Let me know if you prefer this option better.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Logo is usable on any king of background because it has outline, which makes it adjustable to the white, colorful, dark or transparent background.
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Can you send me this same version of the character on the colors: red, yellow, green, purple? It would be great to see how this logo fares on a variety of colored backdrops or on t-shirt colors. Thanks!
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Font is positioned so every element can be seen without loosing either the character features or making the name too small or not readable enough.
Colors on the face are lighter.
Any element can be taken out so it is easily adjustable.
Let me know if you have any suggestions.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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I changed the nose, so it doesn't resemble Sonic.
Let me know what you think about this option, or if you prefer name being below the character.
Personally, I think this option is giving the whole logo more dynamic feel.
Any adjustment or combination with font is possible.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Let me know if this font is what you had in mind.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Let me know which style you prefer.
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and thank you for the feedback.
Here is option with the less chunky rays and "q" adjusted.
Let me know if this is what you had in mind.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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Any feedback is welcome!
Best regards,
Bob.
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Here's new option with different font... #77.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards,
Bob.
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let me know if you have any suggestions or would like to see any adjustments.
Kind regards,
Bob.