I really like the idea, my concern is that the insignia looks a bit like the number 6 until you look at it carefully. Will you see if you can make some modifications so the creativity is still in tact but it will not be confused with a number?
HI Xivi! Thanks so much for your new design concept. I really like it but agree with my boss, the FS looks too much like a 6 when you first glance at it. I'd love to see you give this design another try and I'd also love to see the use of black or a very dark silver rather than middle range grey. We want a bold and powerful logo. We really like the color combinations of black/red, black/red/orange, and black/red/blue. We'd also like the tagline "Lighting Management & Electrical Services" to be a little bigger. But great job, we really like the direction you're going with the FS being combined together in a cool design. Perhaps you could try it with FSS as well. We'd really like to be able to use the logo and the name of the business either together or separately. So if you can create a design with the FSS together than we could use it by itself when we want as an insignia on hats and marketing material, etc. Thanks for the new concept, we'd love to see more from you!
hi, thanks for the helpfull feedback, yup i agree to, it look like a number 6. sure i will revision and update my entry with new concept reference from your feedback, im working on it, thankyou!