These are much improved, however the image kind of conveys a feeling of desolation rather than comfort and coziness. We also feel that there is still a little too much going on within the image that is not specific to what we're trying to communicate. The image should be very simple, but at the same time it should communicate the feelings we described in our brief. We therefore think that any detail in the image should not be superfluous (ie mountains, rivers as this is not something we are trying to communicate), but rather imagery that conveys the feeling that this site is a reliable resource for finding the right place to live.