Hello Cahyadi:
Nice work! GOOD JOB!
Okay... let's work w/Entry #3...
Add a grill underneath those slabs of poop, and change the poop to look more like hamburgers, hotdogs, chicken breasts... you decide what you can fit.
Also... too busy on the very bottom... reverse the gold letters to white like you did with Charbroiled Barbeque. Remove BBQ to give yourself room... see if you can fit size left-to-right of Charbroiled Barbeque. :)
Keep up the good work...
~Sebastian