I like your ideas but would like Perks to be a little larger as the emphasis is on "perks" (give aways). Fringe is "long grass" and hard to play golf out of.Maybe emphasise the play on words with fringe (long grass) and the other could be like the green. Putting surface (smooth)
Looks like you are going to be the successful tenderer. I don't have your skills but would like to see another option with the words on one line or as you have, with Fringe being etched out of grass.Could be grass view at ground level at the bottom and letters growing out of grass or an aerial view looking down on grass. The Perks word would be out of the grass maybe stand alone. Thanks, Ian.