Again I want to remove the gold clubs and four icons in the middle and replace with the heart shown in the bottom but fill up the entire middle. Keep the trail like lines at the bottom but out the circle with three stars in middle of the heart
Remove the golf clubs and four small icons in the middle and replace with the circle with three stars but filling up the entire middle. Keep the border, Friends of McCabe Park and arrows.
Can you do one with these elements too? All green like #60 with hands at top, baseball to left, circle with three stars to right and trail like at the bottom of #59 but without birds and maybe less trees so all four logos are similar size. You have trees above so maybe something that shows just a nice trail.
Also, one important new note. I uploaded a image saying We Believe in Nashville. The circle with the three stars in the middle is about as close as this city has to a logo. Can you find a way to somehow incorporate the circle with the three starts? People identify that entire logo with Nashville.
Look at the bottom heart in #40, I like that one that has the lines in it but make it slightly more in the shape of a heart and remove both the flag tee and green. Keep he lines.
Can you make remove the tee flag and make the heart more obvious below, lease the lines. Maybe make clubs slightly smaller. I like the hands holding the trees
Maybe replace golf ball with baseball bc there's a little league.
Make the green train look more like a trial and remove golf tee
Keep golf clubs.
Add maybe a stream, trees, playground?
I like the border and arrows.
Overall this is great and you did take the direction in the brief. I like the colors but a couple comments. We have no mountains so maybe a stream instead of mountain. I like the golf clubs but maybe something else other than a golf ball and tee. Also we can remove the plane too
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As you may see, the design is flexible as it converts easily to one color.
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I`ll work on the requested revisions and submit them soon.
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Make the green train look more like a trial and remove golf tee
Keep golf clubs.
Add maybe a stream, trees, playground?
I like the border and arrows.
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Please let me know if you would like to see any revisions (fonts, colors, layout etc).
Thank you.