Hi don- I really like the more interesting font and the body shapes. I would like to see some detail added to the dogs, like lines to make their faces clear etc. Nothing crazy, but a little more. I'd also like to see a color other than black, which I think makes it a little too dark. Maybe a lighter blue or even the same blue as the company name. Feel free to play around with it- I like the general idea but think it could get closer to what I want. Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback, I will work on this when I get back to my design computer later on tonight. BTW - When you get a chance, please feel free to take a look at my portfolio to see the scope of my work.
Here is the revised design with blue in place of the black, I also added a little bit of detail to the dogs, please let me know your thoughts. Thanks, Don
I know this is cutting it close, but this last image is great! Would you be able to try something with it? I'd like to see how it would look to add a human element to it- maybe with one dog sitting over "friends" and the other sitting over "again" with both looking up to a person? Even if it was just a pair of legs standing between the two words and cutting off when the dogs end? The idea of the company name is that I am making 'man's best friend' a reality- so perhaps including a person is the piece I'm missing.
I'd also like it better if, instead of the oval behind the dogs, there was a background color in a rectangle behind the words. So the dogs would look like they're sitting on a box instead of floating above. Thanks!
I'm having trouble figuring out what to change here, but it isn't quite right. I think taking away the white dog would help, so there can be a better interaction between human and dog. So the pit bull can be looking up at the person's face. I'm also a female trainer, so I feel like I shouldn't have a man in my logo.